August 08, 2019

show not tell writing


walt add interesting detail to our writing using adjectives , similes ,  metaphors  and show not tell 
this is my emotion chart can you guess the last emotion👌👌👌😊

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4 comments:

  1. Miss B (Principal)13 August, 2019 21:19

    Hi Savannah,
    Well done with the big improvement in your writing.
    Cheers

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  2. Anonymous15 August, 2019 09:36

    Hi Savannah
    your writing shows what your emotion is really easily, i am not sure what the last one is i think Exited?? that's what i do when i am excited, Dont judge me - jorgen

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  3. Anonymous15 August, 2019 09:44

    Hi Savannah my name is Ruby and i am form paparoa Range school but you forgot your punctuation. for guess the emotion i think it is triggered
    but it is a amazing piece of work.🐰🐱🐦

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  4. Anonymous29 August, 2019 09:39

    hi savannah
    your writing shows what a eamotion it was but i lke the sad eamtion the bets but you colud add more information
    by stella

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